Comment on Gioia's (Pedro Diaz)

      Gioia, your idea is great overall. I think you will be able to write a very strong paper with the foundation that you already have. We all know that Sal and Dean are constantly “on the road”, but we never really ask why they are really doing it. At first, I was wondering how you would support the argument of happiness. Once I saw your outline however, I realized how many supports were available in the book and you have almost convinced me with just a few of your ideas that happiness is what started up their journey. Moreover, I love how you have already established a great number of quotes that you can use in your term paper. The one flaw that I found in your post was in your thesis as a whole. I feel as if you should reconsider the structure of your thesis because right now it does not flow very well. Other than that, I think you are ready to write a terrific paper.