Sunday, March 2, 2014

Comment on Meagan's (Pedro Diaz)

      Meagan, you’re pretty much set with your paper. As I told you before, I love what you’re doing with your paper in terms of incorporating Kafka’s institutions. I said in my last post that there were going to be a plethora of supports and you have put even more than I thought of. Also, your outline is already extremely detailed and it seems as if you know exactly what you are going to do with almost every sentence in the essay. Not only do I think that you will be able to write a well-supported paper, but I also think that the paper will be entertaining (specifically for students that have learned about the roles of institutions in society). I can already see that it will be interesting to see the significance of the institutions on the character’s actions. Additionally, I am excited to see the influence that the institutions play on Dean and Sal’s decision to get on the journey that spans the entire book.

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