Comment on Ari's Post (Meagan Adler)

I think that your attention to detail in the background history of Kerouac makes the beginning of your paper come across as very well researched.  I think that it provides good context to the novel and your topic; however, I think that if it is possible it would be good to get your thesis in near the beginning of your paper so that the main point can come across quickly.  I do not know if it is possible for you to do this with the way you have planned your paper.  Overall, I think that the introduction is very informative and contextualizes the novel.  Well done!