Comment On Ari's Post (Meagan Adler)

I think that your paper is very strong and is able to skillfully express your own opinion on On the Road with strong support.  I think that your attention to detail is particularly captivating because it strengthens your overall idea.  I also like how you utilize a historical perspective in expressing your idea.  Your use of language is very sophisticated and makes for a strong paper.  I think that the writing is well thought out and organized and that your topic is very well supported.  I love your paper and cannot wait to read the last part of it!